" It's Raining"-Episode One

My New Novel -" It's Raining"

This  story  is  a combination of  Love  and also Thriller  --Hope everybody likes... like my previous novels.
I know i have to improve my English .. am still in improvising mode.. so please bare my English ..and suggestions/Comments are always welcome.

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7 pm....Vizag Beach.

Kids are playing in the sand .. waves are tired ...the atmosphere is very silent ..everybody started leaving as it is  already dark.
There are many shops on opposite road to the beach but one shop is famous for egg and chicken fried rice, many people come there in evenings to have fried rice.Like everyday Sunil came to have fried rice, he parked his bike. Chintu(11-year boy)who works in the shop is a friend to Sunil.
 After seeing Sunil Chintu said , "Anna come... it is very hot " .

Sunil gave one small smile looking at chintu.
Sunil was standing on his bike, his head turned towards wine shop,after 2 minutes , he walked into a wine shop.
"Brother one beer ", Sunil asked
Shop guy gave him one beer .Sunil who was in confusing mode said
"brother , give two"
shop boy looked at him with doubt and gave him one more beer.
"Can you please pack in a black cover ?" Sunil said
shop boy packed in black cover.

"Chintu, please see my bike , I will go into beach and will come back " ,Sunil said
"Ok anna " chintu said.

Sunil started walking on the beach,he found some lonely place backside of one big rock.After confirming nobody will come there ,He opened a beer and started drinking... looking at the sky.

He is not so regular to the beach but when he is sad or happy he comes to spend some time alone at the beach .
when he is happy he comes to the beach to enjoy the crowd ,he loves to see the sun goes down beneath the ocean, he loves to see the sky turning into different shades, he loves to see small kids playing with sand , he loves to see love birds ..etc.
But when he is sad , he comes to the beach to spend sometimes lonely.

As it was a weekday, there was no big crowd,...slowly  he finished two beers.
After few minutes he felt he has to drink one more beer.
the liquor shop was just on the other side of the road but still he was lazy to go and get it, upon some
confusion , he decided to get it,he went to the shop.


"Brother, one beer ,"Sunil asked
This time the shop boy looked at him strangely and went inside to get the beer.After one minute the boy said "Sorry , no beer "
Sunil was disappointed , upon having a discussion with his mind & heart , he took vodka and one sprite.
he went to the same dark corner again, He mixed vodka and sprite and started drinking.

By staring at the moon and looking at photos in his mobile he completed full vodka.
he was completely down, still ,he went to the shop again and took the same combination and  finished with one more sprite.
He started crying like a small boy,his eyes were spinning , he knows he is not in control .
After few minutes he walked to his bike.

"Anna, come and have fried rice. " chintu shouted seeing Sunil
"No ra , not today " ,Sunil said and started his bike,He is totally out of control.
By the time he was about to leave ...It started raining ...still, he didn't wait for the rain to stop ..he started his bike.

He was driving slowly by enjoying the weather ,at the end of the road ..he took left then suddenly..  he saw a car which is very near, he applied his brake and turned his bike to the right but did not save him hitting the car , next second he was on road.

That car also pulled a quick U-turn.
As it was 12 pm,nobody was on road,immediately 3 girls came outside from car, they went near Sunil and were happy seeing him taking the breath but he was unconscious.

"Sir, sir .... sir ....... " 1st girl(Gowri) said
no response from him.
blood was coming from his nose , both of his knees were hurt.
"Chalo lets go before anybody see us, " 2nd girl(Sajida) said
"No, we can't leave him alone here, he is injured, " 3rd girl(Sudha) said
"So what you will do? will you take him to hosp ??" Gowri said
"If we take him to hosp then again inquiry etc etc , so will leave ..as it is not a big accident, " Sajida said
"No, we can't leave him, let's do one thing , we will take him to our room,will do first aid. " Sudha said
"Room??? no no , are you mad?? " Gowri said
"Nothing will happen, Once he is OK , we can drop him. "Sudha said
other two girls agreed without any chance to speak anything more looking at Sudha.

They parked his bike in the ground which is near to them and they took bike keys and also his wallet and mobile which were beside him.

Somehow they managed to take him to the  room.
"Uffff .. gone case ... am tired carrying him ." Gowri said
"Yes, me too , all because  of this mental Sudha. " Sajida said
"keep quiet , let him take rest, "Sudha said


"I guess he is drunk ", Gowri said
"Yes .. too much smell is coming . " Sajida said
Sudha kept his wallet and mobile on a table.,they have done first aid to him, as he was fully drunk he was still in the unconscious state.
Sajida prepared coffee for all the three.

"hey,lets open and see his wallet. ",Gowri said
"No no " ,sudha said
"Hey nothing will happen, we can inform his friends if we get any contact from his wallet," Saijda said
 this time Sudha was also silent.

They opened his wallet, they saw a  girl's photo.
"Wow , she is  beautiful , lucky guy," Gowri said
"hey see what it is written on the back side of the photo, " Sajida said upon showing the photo.


"what????? " Sudha said
"Yep, see this photo, " Gowri gave the photo to Sudha
Sudha took the photo and saw the words
it was written " PLS FORGIVE ME"
"This means.... he wanted ly  came front of our car !!!!! " Gowri said with confused expression
"Maybe........... " Sudha said while recalling the accident.

"OMG , he wants to die???? Sajida said
"Why he wants to die??? " Gowri said
"ya what is his story??? " Sajida said
"omg , why we bought him to  room ," Gowri said with full fear in her voice
"stop, you worry too much, " Sudha said looking at Gowri

At the time they were discussing, his phone started ringing ....an insistent buzzing sound !!
Sudha took his phone and glanced on at the photo on the mobile screen.

It was the same girl , whose photo they saw from his wallet....with the name "Don't-Pick" .
All three looked each other ... the phone was still ringing ...

"he saved her name as "Don't-Pick" ...He didn't want to talk to her !! " Gowri said with surprise expression

Sudha along with the coffee cup walked towards window ..she started thinking .by.looking outside.

After few minutes
"What are you doing there? come here " Gowri said to Sudha
"Nothing " Sudha said
"Then why you are standing there? " Gowri said
she said pressing her nose to the window "Becoz ..it's raining "    :) :)